Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts
Tuesday, December 15, 2009
MY cute poem!!
I just remembered today I never put up my poem I wrote. This is the one I did on my own! Bunches of folk were saying they liked the poetry, so Im putting my new poem here for everybody to enjoy. Folkre saying Harmonee should be printing up her poems, so maybe I should be doing it to? Im putting ALL mine in the Poly Pre Teen mag anyway, and maybe Harmonee and me could get our own book to. We could call it Sisterwife poems. Im still thinking about writing that NICE greek trajedy to, the kind BYU (Brigham Youngs University) will be OK with, but itll probally take a WAY long time.
Heres the poem
On a WAY cute sunny rainbow kinda day,
It makes me feel so gay,
Im real blessed Im Pratts wife,
cos its a WAY wonderful life,
AWESOME blessings are waiting for everybody reading my blog out there, all of you!!!
So just do what I say you HAVE to do,
Just be in the right group and get a poly marriage,
Cos then youll be happy like me and Pratt when we're eating a wholesome sanwich.
(It was kinda hard finding a rhym for marriage. There was carriage, but Pratt drives a pickup truck so that didnt really work good.)
Im WAY excited about what we're doing for 23rd December. All us gals AND Pratt are being part of something REAL special and even some of the bretherens wives are being in it to!!!!Ill tell you all about it tomorrow.
Blessings!
HoneyDawn
Heres the poem
On a WAY cute sunny rainbow kinda day,
It makes me feel so gay,
Im real blessed Im Pratts wife,
cos its a WAY wonderful life,
AWESOME blessings are waiting for everybody reading my blog out there, all of you!!!
So just do what I say you HAVE to do,
Just be in the right group and get a poly marriage,
Cos then youll be happy like me and Pratt when we're eating a wholesome sanwich.
(It was kinda hard finding a rhym for marriage. There was carriage, but Pratt drives a pickup truck so that didnt really work good.)
Im WAY excited about what we're doing for 23rd December. All us gals AND Pratt are being part of something REAL special and even some of the bretherens wives are being in it to!!!!Ill tell you all about it tomorrow.
Blessings!
HoneyDawn
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Greek people
Some REAL nice folkve been writing me letters and I LOVE they think my blog is cute and girly. I still need to put more cute pics in, so Ill try to do that.
Im WAY glad Im not the ONLY one who cant see what Harmonees poems about. (I put it up yesterday) You need to write stuff that folk UNDERSTAND! Rebeckah says Elpis is a GREEK person called Hope. So why didnt Harmonee just say that first off?? Hopes a WAY cuter name than ELPIS! So whose Chimaera then. Is he a Greek guy?
I dont think we need to be writing about Greek people. We need to be writing about our own folk, especially us folk in the truth. Did you hear all that stuff a while back about Greek people and BYU and the U?? (Pratt says there might be folk reading who're not in Utah so I should say BYU is Brigham Youngs University and the U is the University of Utah) There was a real big fuss in the news. Seems the U was coming to BYU to do a Greek Trajedy show with a weird name like The Buckeye (?) Then, all of a sudden BYU says NO WAY!! Seems they were expecting a real NICE Greek Trajedy and then they heard it had nasty stuff in it like killing and women doing bad stuff. I TOTALLY think their right to say "we only watch NICE Greek Trajedys."
Rebeckah says to she thinks Harmonees depressed and I could cheer her up. I think I'll do the stuff Melissa said about writing a poem WITH Harmonee so I can make it rhym. I never would of thought of that! AWESOME!
I know Harmonee'll feel HEAPS better when she gets to learn how to write a real good poem.
Pratts birthday party tonight - Im giving him his gift their!! Can't wait!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRATT!!!!
( I need to say about COMMENTS - those're the letters folk are writing. You can see some on the left of my blog, but if you want to see ALL of them , then youve got to look at the end of my writing every day and click on where it says COMMENTS.)
(Another thing - thanks for clicking on the adds cos Im saving up to get stuff for my crafts again - the deer horn chandeleer turned out GREAT!!)
Im WAY glad Im not the ONLY one who cant see what Harmonees poems about. (I put it up yesterday) You need to write stuff that folk UNDERSTAND! Rebeckah says Elpis is a GREEK person called Hope. So why didnt Harmonee just say that first off?? Hopes a WAY cuter name than ELPIS! So whose Chimaera then. Is he a Greek guy?
I dont think we need to be writing about Greek people. We need to be writing about our own folk, especially us folk in the truth. Did you hear all that stuff a while back about Greek people and BYU and the U?? (Pratt says there might be folk reading who're not in Utah so I should say BYU is Brigham Youngs University and the U is the University of Utah) There was a real big fuss in the news. Seems the U was coming to BYU to do a Greek Trajedy show with a weird name like The Buckeye (?) Then, all of a sudden BYU says NO WAY!! Seems they were expecting a real NICE Greek Trajedy and then they heard it had nasty stuff in it like killing and women doing bad stuff. I TOTALLY think their right to say "we only watch NICE Greek Trajedys."
Rebeckah says to she thinks Harmonees depressed and I could cheer her up. I think I'll do the stuff Melissa said about writing a poem WITH Harmonee so I can make it rhym. I never would of thought of that! AWESOME!
I know Harmonee'll feel HEAPS better when she gets to learn how to write a real good poem.
Pratts birthday party tonight - Im giving him his gift their!! Can't wait!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRATT!!!!
( I need to say about COMMENTS - those're the letters folk are writing. You can see some on the left of my blog, but if you want to see ALL of them , then youve got to look at the end of my writing every day and click on where it says COMMENTS.)
(Another thing - thanks for clicking on the adds cos Im saving up to get stuff for my crafts again - the deer horn chandeleer turned out GREAT!!)
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Poems
Ive been thinking real HARD about what to put in the Poly Pre Teen Mag, but Ive been REAL busy lately so I didnt get much yet. Pratt DID give me a poem that Harmonee wrote. He said she didnt do it for the mag but it might be OK, so I read it. Oh-my-heck! WHAT a poem!! I thought Id put it here so you can read it to, so you can see what Im saying. Here it is!
"Day
Devious in scintillating sunlight.
"Day
Devious in scintillating sunlight.
Chimaera rises in noxious bubblings from darkest fluid jet.
Greedily grasping,
Dragging Elpis from warm home
Down into frigid depths
Leaving only flowers forlorn on icy wave.
Day
Dark in its bright, black sun of hopelessness."
What in the heck is all THAT about! PRATT didnt know even! We CANT use it cos -
A. It doesnt ryhm even!
A. It doesnt ryhm even!
B. Its got made up words nobody heard of! Whose Elpis?- its not a cute Utah name even!!!
c. It doesnt seem real happy. (I think she should have gone with the flowers and sunshine and put in more stuff like rainbows and babies)
4. Im the editor and I say no.
Im working on a poem right now. Ill let you read it when its done and I''ll let you read some of the other stuff when weve got it ready.
Pratt says maybe I could sit down with Harmonee and do some poem writing with her. He says itll bring us closer together and really bring in the spirit. He says all us sisterwives need to be best buddies and love sharing EVERYTHING with each other. Hes SO right! Im going to see if Harmonee wants writing lessons.
Oh, and Melissa, Im WAY glad you like the blog. If your thinking about a polygamy marriage itll help you see what its like! Totally AWESOME! Im thinking it might help gals who're thinking of leaving, to, so they can see what it CAN be like for them if they do it right.
I got another letter from a gal called Cat Whisperer. WAY cute name. (I never heard it before) Did you see the pics of cute baby animals Ive got on the page way down on the left? You might like them!
Pratt says maybe I could sit down with Harmonee and do some poem writing with her. He says itll bring us closer together and really bring in the spirit. He says all us sisterwives need to be best buddies and love sharing EVERYTHING with each other. Hes SO right! Im going to see if Harmonee wants writing lessons.
Oh, and Melissa, Im WAY glad you like the blog. If your thinking about a polygamy marriage itll help you see what its like! Totally AWESOME! Im thinking it might help gals who're thinking of leaving, to, so they can see what it CAN be like for them if they do it right.
I got another letter from a gal called Cat Whisperer. WAY cute name. (I never heard it before) Did you see the pics of cute baby animals Ive got on the page way down on the left? You might like them!
Blessings,
HoneyDawn
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